Hi,
This proposal wants to improve the current documentation page we have at:
http://platform.xwiki.org/xwiki/bin/view/AdminGuide/InstallationStandalone
in order to be more easy to be followed by beginner users.
The proposal is here:
http://design.xwiki.org/xwiki/bin/view/Proposal/XWikiOrgInstallationLocal
Let me know what you think.
Thanks,
Caty